During the process of translating the walkthrough I noted some suggestions for minor rewordings. In the following I mostly quote a full sentence and mark suggested changes in blue.
How to create and interpret system information collected by the GetSystemInfo utility 4.0- "The newest version (Version 4.0.X.X) includes many
new features that make the creation and interpretation of a
user's system easier for both the user and
the engineer."
Getting Started - "If all other applications are not stopped
prior to running the GSI, the utility may pause or “freeze” and the Stop Report button may be inactive.
- "Typical size of the log files range
s from 800
KB to 1.2 MB"
Uploading a report - "Once registered, a confirmation email will be sent and then you will be
allowed access."
- "You have access to additional information such as the file's
rating and comments."
- The page should reflect that the tab "Mine" has been renamed to "My reports".
Viewing a report - "If the user is running an older version of the Kaspersky Lab software, then it will be shown here and
a link to download the latest version is provided."
- In the descriptions for the tabs "System Properties", "Devices" and "Process/Services/Drivers" I would use lower case letters.
Troubleshooting with the report- "
Troubleshooting with the parser will be broken up into seven categories:"
Installation Issues - "After getting a GSI report and posting to the online parser, any incompatible software resident on the system will be
self-evident. "
- "It is recommended to uninstall any programs that are incompatible or use the removal tool for that software if there are only traces of
it left."
- "How
does this work?"
- "
The more appropriate rates you do,
the more XP you'll get and
the higher your coefficient will be."
Activation Issues - "Note – if there were
drivers to update in the above example, text would be in orange."
Computer has become slow, sluggish - "The issue arises because the program is trying to manage the file system in the
background while the
File-Anti-Virus is constantly scanning the defragging program at the same time."
Update Issue - Page title should be renamed to "Update Issue
s" for consistency reasons.
- "Change the update source from the default settings to
ftp://ftp.kaspersky.com./" - Is there a special reason for the extra dot in the address, maybe it should be a full stop after the sentence?
- "the first update can be very large – 50
MB"
Blue Screens- "During
startup (before it starts
Windows) tap the F8 key on the keyboard several times."
- "Please note that
malware can cause blue screens on the computer and should be considered as a culprit when troubleshooting these types of issues."
Malware- "The GSI utility is very helpful when determining if
malware is present on the computer."
- "[...], it is recommended that you change the settings to the highest before running the utility on the
user's system."
- "[...] because the
GetSystemInfo utility couldn’t retrieve the information of those files."
General- Spelling of "Online Parser" / "Parser" is not consistent (upper/lower case).